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The Day Is White
The Day Is White – Mary Charman-Smith
Indigo Dreams Publishing, 52pp, £6.75, ISBN 978-1-907401-15-2
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Then, I arrived in cottons
and a straw hat,
unfolded my easel
and sat in the garden, painting
red dawns and damson dusks.
Summer and the White Rose
It is always a pleasure for me to absorb and appraise the creative writings of a poet who essentially paints with words, and Mary Charman -Smith, the author of this sensitively crafted collection is an artist in the fullest sense of the word. Having gained her M.A. in Creative Writing at University College, Chichester, she currently teaches English in her native Sussex. And it is to the beautiful countryside of The Downs and its wave-washed fringes of coastline that the reader is conveyed throughout this sterling collection of poems.
Mary's love of trees and flowers is substantially addressed by those many instances of colour reference that so typify her work :
I await the bronzes of your evening wear
that all too soon, will dull to winter's grey.
Yet, still within those silver coloured twigs
a dainty white dressed lady surely lives.
To A Tree
In her reflective poem, ‘THE DAISY FIELD’, Mary compares a field of daisies to the brightest constellations of the night sky. There is somewhat of a childlike wonderment as she dreamily concentrates her attentions on one of these flowers in particular:
I inspect a daisy,
a gold-centred sun with ice-warm rays,
each petal representing a life phase.
But altogether round, like a tiny ballet skirt.
The Daisy Field
Coastline imagery abounds in a number of Mary’s poems as she observes the changing moods of the sea; and most especially in her poem of the same name as she relives, in verse, her openness to the full rigours of a gale-force wind across the ‘shore line:
I glance to sea, but there is no boat in trouble
and no living form, not even
a gull thrown across sky and iron-bent
against the magnitude of the gale.
The Sea
Childhood recollections are also affectionately revived, and no more so than in ‘THE GULL’, a poem that savours the naivety of a young girl's awakening awareness on the occasion of the birth of a baby sister. Personification is employed in great measure in ‘THE MOON THE WAVES AND THE BREEZE’ - A rather unorthodox approach, certainly, but very endearing, none-the-less:
And then the sea breeze saw
he started to whisper and sing,
and play the strings of marram grass
that lives on the creamy dunes.
The Moon The Waves And The Breeze
There is much assonance and pleasing alliteration in Mary’s work and a subtle interspersal of internal rhymes and the occasional half-rhyme. I very much admired her two villanelle inclusions, despite the absence of usual standard rhyming. And two of her poems, featured side by side (‘SNOW’ and ‘EVENING BLUES’) are presented in near-sonnet form - perhaps intentionally, but they read quite well, in spite of this apparent anomaly. Mary Charman-Smith is a regular contributor to REACH POETRY and THE DAWNTREADER and has been highly rated in INDIGO DREAMS POETRY COMPETITION 2009", This is her fifth collection to achieve publication, and we wish her well with all future literary ventures.
BMJ has got together with Quantum Leap’s Alan J Carter to produce ‘Covered In Rhyme’ a two-part book covering Poetry Forms and Literary Terms. This has the answers to all who have wondered how to write a Rondeaux, a Cinquain, a Triolet….Part One covers the Forms with clear, easy to follow examples and runs to 64 pages. Part Two goes through Poetry and Literary terms alphabetically, including a definitive 11 pages on Punctuation! (Should that exclamation mark have been there?) I have my copies on the bookcase by my desk. I already refer to it on various occasions and genuinely believe it is such an excellent reference book that it is invaluable to the modern poet. BMJ sent me flyers and I’ve printed off more as I wish every RP reader to have the opportunity to buy it. Personally, if I’d been approached with this, I’d have published it under Indigo Dreams Publishing and put it out to the mass market, I rate it that highly. Congratulations to you both. Ed.)
Page(s) 53-55
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