Music in the Mirabell
A fountain sings. Clouds, white and tender,
Are set in the clear blueness.
Engrossed silent people walk
At evening through the ancient garden.Ancestral marble has grown grey.
A flight of birds seeks far horizons.
A faun with lifeless eyes stares
Into shadows which glide into darkness.The leaves fall red from the old tree
And circle in through open windows.
A fiery gleam ignites indoors
And conjures up wan ghosts of fear.A white stranger steps into the house.
A dog runs wild through ruined passages.
The maid extinguishes a lamp,
At night are heard sonata sounds.
Alexander Stillmark’s versions of poems by Trakl appeared in MPT 8. Alexander Stillmark writes: Georg Trakl (1887-1914) is a modernist poet who possessed a high degree of originality. He evolved a symbolic language very much his own and one which may at first encounter make him appear obscure. Yet gradual familiarity with this highlywrought, economic style, with its patterned imagery and recurrent usages, makes him not forbidding but increasingly accessible. Trakl developed rapidly from being an epigone still largely influenced by the opulent style of Decadence, towards an individual style bearing the indelible stamp of his poetic gift: this is clear and sparse, arresting in its patterned diction and imagery, resonant and musical. The recurrent formulaic diction, novel verbal arrangement and incantatory qualities, gave him a voice that is at times reminiscent of Hölderlin, yet owes rather more to his admired French fellow-poets Baudelaire, Rimbaud, Mallarmé. Yet Trakl remains an Austrian poet and, like his compatriot and precursor Lenau, he is preeminently the poet of autumnal moods, though lacking all traces of Romantic self-indulgence. His modernity lies in the hard, almost frigid, clarity of his diction, the severely disciplined mastery of word and image. His poetic style may, to some degree, be likened to musical composition both in its formal patterning and the emotive directness of appeal. An outstanding feature is the separation of lines, phrases and images into discrete or isolated entities. Trakl’s style demonstrates how poetry empowers words, giving them new emphasis and freshness of meaning. Most poems are written in the minor key, as it were, and the translator must attune his language and style accordingly. It is also important to note that there is a refinement to Trakl’s language, a dignity or hauteur which emphatically removes it from the language of everyday discourse. To capture as nearly as possible this rarified diction, as well as to render individual meanings accurately (ever mindful of poetic ambiguities) has been my guiding principle. The following selection represents a cross-section of Trakl’s writing, the first two poems (‘Music in the Mirabell’ and ‘The Beautiful City’) being impressionistic evocations of his native Salzburg, and the last poem(‘Psalm II’) written in his final year and forming part of his posthumously published work. |
Translated by Alexander Stillmark
Page(s) 44-45
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